Critiques

If anybody would like a critique, please comment here about the deviation you want me to critique.

If you don't have a premium membership (for the critique feature), I'll post criticism as a deviation and put them in my gallery as written works so people can find them easily if it's pretty extensive (critiques as comments tend to get lost to the void).  If it's a shorter critique, I'll just copy the comment here.

I'd appreciate a watch, but that's not necessary if you don't want to.

Visual art and short poems or very short fiction is no problem.  Longer written works can not be critiqued in entirety (since I don't have time to read the whole thing)- but I will critique on general style, and on your opening.